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Change: Jim/Sam got out to the crime scene when they heard the shot. Jim's soul started working in Sam body and realized that Melinda and her
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Change: Welcome to the Java Village Coffee! If you're tired or just want to chat with your friends, this is the best place for it! Someone at the store has called the Sheriff, There was an unusual box
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Dec 4 2008, 2:35 AM EST
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Change: doesn't wake up until they get to the hospital.(new location is avalaibe: Mercy Hospital) GSRalltheway Professor Payne walks by and notices that all the sirens where at Mel's shop. He starts to worry and runs twords the shop. Jimel1981
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Change: she doesn't wake up until they get to the hospital.(new location is avalaibe: Mercy Hospital) GSRalltheway Professor Payne walks by and notices that all the sirens where at Mel's shop. He starts to worry and runs twords the shop.
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Change: don't wanna die! *she starts crying too*Melinda: I'm sure he is Joy! I'm sure!For the 3rd time Jime can bring back Joy, but she doesn't wake up until they get to the hospital. (new location is avalaibe: Mercy Hospital) GSRalltheway
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Nov 26 2008, 2:35 PM EST
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Change: Jim helps to his old colleagues to get Joy to the ambulance. They trying to stabilize her condition, but when Melinda gets to the car too they can hear a long solemn beep from the E.C.G.Melinda: Noooo! Please Sis! Not you! You
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Change: The hooded man does not listen. He just turns around and laughs and then starts running to the Antique shop. Gibs and AJ run after the man. When they get to the shop they relize that the man is holding Delia, Ned, and AJ's son hostage.Mean wile
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Nov 26 2008, 1:17 PM EST
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Change: to see if they can catch someone.Melinda: Jim, are you...Jim: Yes, Melinda...I realized who I am. But knownow call 911, she needs to get to the hospital now!Melinda tried here phone, but she saw it was dead again... GSRalltheway
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Nov 26 2008, 11:41 AM EST
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Change: Jim/Sam got out to the crime scene when they heard the shot. Jim's soul started working in Sam body and realized that Melinda and her
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Change: hands Ned $20. Here take this for all your help. Ned: No I don't want you money I like hanging out with Teddy he is fun. AJ: Are you sure. Ned walks off with Teddy.Teddy: Bye Mommy..AJ and Tompson suddenly here a gun shot. jimel1981
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Nov 25 2008, 5:06 PM EST
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Change: AJ: I am going to try to get rid of this crowd. Tompson I need your help. Do you still have the mega phone sill in the trunk of your cruser. Tompson: Yeah let me go get it. Tompson leaves to get the mega phone. AJ walks to
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Change: Joy turns around an go inside of the alley to start the search. She just made a few steps, when a ghost (that one who lead Mel to the body) appears front of her.Joy: Where's the body? I know you met Mel earlier and she found your body, so...
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Change: she searches the alley. Got it?Gibs: Got it Sheriff.They hang up and wait untill a black GMC Yukon Hibrid parks beside them. GSRalltheway When Delia, Ned, and Teddy arrive there uis a big crowed standing trying to see what is going on. jimel1981
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Change: kidding?Gibs: No, the alley is empty.AJ: Great, Joy is on her way to the alley. Wait her and stay with her while she searches the alley. Got it?Gibs: Got it Sheriff.They hang up and wait untill a black GMC Yukon Hibrid parks beside them. GSRalltheway
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Change: neck. Melinda throws up Melinda: Is that you who did thisThe ghost DissapearsMelinda looks for her cell and trys to call the police but her phone is dead. So she runs to the police station. jimel1981 The officers get to the sceen but the body is gone.
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Nov 23 2008, 12:54 PM EST
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Nov 23 2008, 12:20 PM EST
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Change: Someone at the store has called the Sheriff, There was an unsual box places at the front of the door. The sheriff picks up the box and takes it to the station. jimel1981
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Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details.
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