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Change: Ricky: His Name is, His Name is, Robert Hess or FrogDog723, He is a high school kid who hangs at the Middle School because he
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Change: Jone: This is good. Now did he have any spical facial features that you can reconize, like a scar or tatoo or anything like that. Ricky: He where glasses and had earring with a skull hinging from it. Jone: Wich ear. Ricky: His Right ear. But
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Change: of Ricky.Jone: Hi my name is Jone Savge. So you going to help me with the composit of Frogdog?Ricky: Yep I guss as long as the sheriff keeps her word. AJ: I promis no one will know that is was you. Jone: Ok lets start. Jimel1981
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Change: Ricky: His Name is, His Name is, Robert Hess or FrogDog723, He is a high school kid who hangs at the Middle School because he
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Change: who is he?Ricky: As I said once he said he would kill me if I tell it to the police!AJ: Just tell us! Noone will know about you told us!Ricky: Okay, but promise me, you will save my life!Gibs: We promise you! GSRalltheway
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Change: a young boy was expelled from grandview middel for having a gun in his locker. No one is talking. Ricky: All i can tell you is I meet him online. Jimel1981
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Change: Ricky: I can't tell you the man said he would kill me if I told any one about him. AJ: We can protect you, your
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Change: than I planned.AJ: Great, meet you at the car...The Sheriff walks out with box from the building to the parking lots and gets in to her car, while Melinda dials their home-number. (Continued at Jim and Melinda's House and Same as it Ever Was) GSRalltheway
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Change: thethen yes.Melinda: That's not funny. *she tries to open it, but the door isn't moving*The lock is broken. Some officers come to the evidence locker to get out some evidence, the first of them is opens easily the door, and AJ get out fast.Melinda: Oh
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Change: AJ: Thanks, but hey, we gotta go the help Joy! Maybe my ghost can help to find that body. Oh but first I think I need to see Teddy.Melinda: Teddy is fine, he is with Delia and Ned. I'll call Jim that I'll go home later than I planned.
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Change: going to go back and help AJ. Joy: You have to be kidding me what is this guy Ben Willis from I know what You did last Summer. I am going to head out there now. You and AJ be carefull. jimel1981
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Change: Melinda: AJ is traped in the evidence room. She said for me to tell you that the officers called and found the Ally empty and that they are waiting for you to investaget the scene. I am going to go back and help AJ. Joy: You have
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Change: She tries to open the locker but its not moving. Melinda just stood up from the floor, because she fall to the ground when the cabnet hit her.Melinda: AJ, are you all right?AJ: Mel? What are you doing here?Melinda: I guess you have
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Change: file cabnet move infront of Melinda. Melinda: Whispers Leave her alone. AJ gets to the Evdicene locker and takes out the box carefully. As soon as the she has the box the locker slams shut and all te lights go out in the room.
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Change: Joy: You can follow her, but I'll wait here, if she comes back I'll say you have to go home to see Jim or Sam, or whoever is he now. Hey, I nearly forget to ask, how his remember goin'?Melinda: Not so good, he
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Change: please wait here. AJ leaves to get the box. Melinda sees a ghost following AJ.Melinda looks over at Joy"Did you see that?"Joy: Yes I did. Melinda: Should we follow her? I know she said to wait but I am worried that ghost looks minicing.
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Change: you here?AJ: She found a body in the JavaVillage alley.Joy: Really?Melinda: Yes, a ghost led me there.Joy looks at AJ: See, I said I feel that something strange going on in Grandview. So let's see that box, if I'm right it contains puzzles too. GSRalltheway
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Change: "So Melinda whats wrong, Sorry I missed you today its been one of the busiest days since I started as Sheriff."Melinda: I came here to report that I found a body well the ghost of the person led me to it. AJ: where is the
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Change: self. jimel1981 Joy: Will do it. Did you see Mel? I can feel that something strange will happen, maybe she knows something. I'll check this box first in the lab, and after i'll be there. See ya later.Joy hangs up the phone, and starts working on the box... GSRalltheway
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