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| Jan 31 2009, 4:57 PM EST (current) | GSRalltheway | 571 words deleted |
| Jan 2 2009, 6:52 AM EST | GSRalltheway | 134 words added |
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You're at Grandview's Forest! Be Safe!You can meet here: a lot of ghosts and sometimes Melinda and Jim
| In a cabin the stranger is sitting at a desk with bullets all around and a knife. He is putting Joy's name on all the bullets. He also has a picture of melinda with a bullet hole in the head on the picture. The stranger picks up the picture. Stranger: Poor, Poor, Joy what is she going to do with out her sister. Your Next Melinda. | Jimel1981 |
| The Stranger walk to his car with Melinda's adress in his hand. He looks down at it. Then puts it in his pocket and gets in his car and heads for Melind's house. (Continue Inside Car and Antque Shop) | Jimel1981 |
| The Stranger gets out of his car and walks to the cabin. He hangs his coat up and walks over to the desk and lights a candel. Because he has no power in the cabin. He then pulls out a piece of paper and starts writeing down his plan to kill Jim. "Ok let see, I will follow them untill I see that Jimmy boy is alone, then i will jump him slit his throat and steel his wallet. Then I will wait a day or so then I will get Melinda at home. She will not know what hit her. I can just hear the screams now. Hehehe." As he is writing he hears a noise and blows out the candel and hides in a the bath room be hind an old shower curttin. "Who the hell is that, Luckly I stole an old junker with no plates so they can't trace my car." | Jimel1981 |
| Joy and Sanders walk down beside the car.Joy: Untracable for the first look, no plates.Sanders: Oh yes, but I guess we'll have an underframe number, just we have to take this to the garage of the lab.Joy: Sure, if we'll have a warrant for it.Sanders: Just a call to Morlean judge. *he smileys*They see the cabin.Joy: Well, well, this time I'll got George! *pulls out her gun*Sanders: Wow, slow down honey. We need to call backup.Joy: Oh yes,yes, and till the backup comes George will be in another city...*she moves closer to the door*At the same time the Stranger (so George) clims out on the window of the bathroom, after he left a small gift for the pair.Sanders: Joy, stop now. Did you hear this? *he hears how George climbs out but can't recognize what was it*Joy: Yep, he is in there! * she tries to open the door, but when it moves she hears a click* Sanders: A bomb! Run Joy! | GSRalltheway |
| They run a few metres and then the cabin blows up within all the evidences of the Stranger. The power of the explosion press Joy and Sanders to the ground. After the smoke get away, Thomas come up to Joy.Sanders: Sara, honey, are you all right?But he got no answer.Sanders: Sara! Hey, can you hear me??For the third time, Sara regained consciousness.Joy: Oh Tom, if I got this George, I swear I'll kill him!! *she stands up slowly but angrily*Sanders: Calm down dear. Are ya all right?Joy: Yeah, I'm fine, thanks. Did you call some backup earlier?Sanders: Yep, they have to arrive soon.Joy: Great, I'm going to call Melinda, she has to know about this. *she goes to their cair to call her sister* | GSRalltheway |
