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Change: Hey Sarah, Do you rember me? Did you like the present I left for you at the door? HEHE I found you. You thought I
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Change: Sanders: Not really, just a fingerprint from the first box, and a DNA from a hair from the 3rd box. That's all.Joy: All evidences lead to George Chase, right?Sanders: Yep.Joy: That's great...*her phone rings* It's Joy.Melinda: Hey Sis, it's me Mel.Joy: Hey Mel, what's up?
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Change: Joy: I've got a message from him earlier.He said "I am coming for you and your friends. Next time don't screw with me. Don't for get to look at the paper, there is a story in there that you might find intersting."Sanders: What story?Joy: Dunno, go
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Change: Just seconds after they left Thomas Sanders get to Joy's office to tell her about the results of the examinations of the boxes. He finds her office open and empty.Sanders: She must go to her Sis's shop, she has to know these results, Grandview's safety depends on them!He
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Change: Hey Sarah, Do you rember me? Did you like the present I left for you at the door? HEHE I found you. You thought I
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Change: Stranger: Hey Sarah, Do you rember me. Did you like the present I left for you at the door. HEHE I found you. You thought
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Change: PolcePolice Dept.)Dept.)When Joy opens her office she saw a black box, with no sender adress. She calls AJ again then start working on the box. She examines it with UV-light and X-ray too. After she finds no clue of bomb, she opens the box.Joy:
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Change: When Joy opens her office she saw a black box, with no sender adress. She calls AJ again then start working on the box. She examines it with UV-light and X-ray too. After she finds no clue of bomb, she opens the box.Joy: Pieces of puzzle.
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Change: The night just started in Grandview. Sara Joy walked down in the Mainsquare to her workplace, to the Crime Lab of this little lovely town. She met with Melinda Gordon, her sister.Joy: Hey Mel, what's up with you and Jim?Gordon: Hey Sara! Nothing much...Joy: Any ghosts? *smiling*
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Change: Welcome to the Crime Lab of Grandview!It's a small lab, where Sara Joy works. You can find her here, or you could find here sometimes: Melinda and Jim
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